Wednesday, April 18, 2012

January 2007

As you may have noticed, the excerpts from The Fiennes are not back-to-back. This piece is set during Reuben's second bout with leukemia. It has been the hardest section to write on an emotional level, but I also felt like I got closer to understanding my characters. Comments are welcome.


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One night, Helen lay awake in bed, rubbing her belly. Her period had arrived two weeks late, which was nothing new, but her cramps ripped through her whole pelvis. It was as though there were a twenty pound weight pulling on her uterus, and a squeezing pain that radiated through her hips and legs. She thought about taking something for the pain, but doubted that ibuprofen would dull the pain enough to let her sleep. So she lay in bed, looking up at the glow in the dark stars her father had stuck on the ceiling when she was five. There were a few sets arranged like actual constellations, like the Big Dipper, but most of them were placed in her father’s attempts at animal shapes. The x-shape was supposed to be a butterfly, and the straight line of stars with a sideways v at the end was a fish. She remembered him picking her up and lifting her up so she could stick the last ten on the ceiling herself, and sighed.
            Since she was eleven or twelve, she moved further and further away from him, eager to prove that she was a woman, not the little girl who used to always be just footsteps away from her daddy. But after Christmas Eve, when her father was too sick to get out of bed, she began to regret pushing him away. On nights like this, when she lay awake, consumed by the pain, she wished she could go back to being five and hide away in her father’s room. At her age, though, she just had the faint memory of resting her head on his chest, feeling it rise and fall under her cheek until she would fall asleep.
            When her cramps started to subside, she edged out of bed, hoping to grab some ibuprofen from the bathroom medicine cabinet before the pain grounded her again. The bathroom door was closed, but the light was on inside, so she knocked.
            “Dad?”
            There was no response, but Helen heard him moaning and throwing up. “Shit.” As if on cue, her cramps returned. She knocked on the door again. “Dad, are you okay?”
            Still no answer. She put her ear to the door and heard the toilet seat being flipped down. A minute or so later, she heard a lot of muffled splashing, and then a loud crash. Something big hit the floor. Her forehead beaded with sweat, dreading the worst. She got down on the floor and tried to peer through the crack between the door and the floor. There was something blocking some of the light from coming through the crack. It had to be him.
            “I’M GOING IN!” she shouted through the door, waiting for a response.
            It took seconds for her to pick the lock with a penny. When she opened the door, she jumped back.
            Though she had sat in on all of her father’s doctor’s appointments since the diagnosis, and stayed with him at Westwood, she had always hidden behind a curtain when he had to take his clothes off or have particularly invasive tests. The privacy curtains were one of the few dividers left in their relationship. It was difficult to pretend the boundaries they kept for most of her life were still in place when she had slept in his hospital room, wiped sweat and vomit from his face, and kept track of his food and medications for him for over a year.
            Now, she was leaning on the doorframe, frightened for her father’s life but still embarrassed to find him with his boxers around his ankles. There was a puddle of brown and red fluid on the floor beneath him. She threw a towel over his hips, but still felt vaguely guilty for seeing him so compromised, and started apologizing. He was still breathing faintly, but didn’t stir when she grabbed his shoulder and shouted at him to wake up. The whole bathroom stunk with stale vomit and shit; the smell felt like a thick cloud that flew in her face. She felt herself start to gag, and ran into the kitchen, ripping her cell phone from the charger cord. After she called 911, she went back into the bathroom, called Dr. Kutzner and told him what happened.
            After giving him the basics, she paused to let him talk.
            “You called 911?”
            “Yeah, but they won’t be here for another ten minutes!”
            “Okay. Okay. I need you to calm down. Is he breathing?”
            “Yes, but –”
            “Helen, turn him on his side and open his mouth so he doesn’t choke.”
            With her father unconscious, she had to grasp his shoulder and the middle of his back and roll him onto his side. It was more like pushing a heavy piece of furniture than Dr. Kutzner made it sound. She readjusted the towel as he threw up on her leg, twice. She sighed, wondering how much of this ordeal he would remember, if he survived it.           
            “The ambulance is here. I’ll call tomorrow.”
            Donna had been in the ED waiting room with her daughter Ashley when she saw the stretcher rush by, with Helen running ahead of the EMTs. There appeared to be dried blood and vomit all over her pajama pants. She had her hand on her stomach, but it was clear to Donna that she was there to watch over her dad. According to many regulars at Pete’s diner, the only time Helen had been treated at Westwood was when she fainted after she had lost thirty pounds.
            “Mom, what’s that smell?” Ashley whispered, pinching her nose.
            “Honey, that man is very sick. You know what you’re smelling.”
            “Wait, that was Leni’s dad!” Ashley exclaimed. “I thought he was getting better.”
            “I know, baby.” Reuben’s leukemia was practically common knowledge in Pleasant Valley. For Christmas, Pete had organized a benefit for Reuben, to help pay off his insurance and home bills, and also a smaller fund to give Helen a new dress for her senior prom. “I did too.”
            Ashley ended up in the bed next to Reuben. Donna hated that Westwood still only separated the ER beds with curtains. The only private rooms were the trauma rooms, which they usually reserved for people who had been in car crashes or shootings. Donna knew it was dangerous to put an immune-compromised cancer patient with severe diarrhea so close to other patients, but Westwood had trouble raising money for the ER. Most people who donated money to the hospital were interested in donating to the pediatric and oncology wards.
            Donna could hear Helen’s voice interspersed between the two nurses trying to keep her father hydrated and clean and the panicky ER intern, who had apparently never seen severe C. Difficile. The official diagnosis hadn’t come yet, but that’s what Donna supposed it was. She first saw it when she had a clinical rotation in a nursing home. The spores had lingered on a single bedrail for days, infecting ten patients and a nurse who was taking antibiotics for a bladder infection. From what Donna remembered, it was a messy, painful illness. Most of the people who had it recovered after three days of IV antibiotics and fluids, but one man had a fever of 104 and fell, killing him. She imagined Reuben got it because of his chemo regimen. One of the common effects of chemo was a dramatic reduction in white blood cells. While there were many things patients could do to insulate themselves from pathogens, from avoiding undercooked food to having relatives do housecleaning, it was impossible to keep out everything.
            Behind the curtain, the steady beep of Reuben’s heart and blood pressure monitors sped up, setting off a series of alarms. Donna paused and turned around instinctively.
            “What’s going on?!” Helen shrieked over the alarm.
            “Step outside, miss,” the intern ordered.
            “His pressure’s 80 over 50!” one of the nurses shouted.
            “No,” Helen said.
            “Someone get that girl out of here.”
            “I need you to leave right now,” the intern barked.
            “Not before you tell me what’s going on.” Helen stomped her foot and pushed her way back behind the curtain. Her father had nasal oxygen and a fast IV drip, alongside a mess of monitor leads. The color in his face had faded to a grayish pallor, even though his heart was racing. She put her hand to his neck, and only felt a faint stir against her fingertips. Her body started to shake. She had never seen anyone this sick, and the alarms started beeping again.
            “CODE GREY!” the intern shouted out.
            At Westwood, Code Grey was the code for a security emergency, but Helen thought it was a medical code, and reached for her father’s hand.
            Donna held Ashley’s hand while her arm was set and cast, but kept one ear angled toward Helen. No one was there to hold her hand as she asked the doctor and nurses to explain what they were doing. The girl couldn’t get an answer because of how quickly they were working. Ashley squeezed her hand tighter.
            “Mom?” she asked. “What’s wrong?”
            Donna attempted a smile. “I’m just glad I can be here for you, Ashley.”
            They heard a scream on the other side of the curtain. Donna clutched her chest. It was Helen. Poor girl. The smell that followed her father into Westwood cast a deathly wave over them. Donna saw Ashley cover her mouth and gag. Helen started screaming at the intern, demanding that she stay with her father, and the intern kept shouting out Code Grey. Donna covered Ashley’s ears and told her not to worry.
            The security officer who responded to the call had thought he had been called in to break up a fight or to restrain a violent patient. It was not unusual for him to be called to the ED to help hold someone down long enough for the nurses to secure their wrists and ankles in restraints. He had been told that there was an aggressive woman at Bed 5 who was badgering a doctor and thought to be violent. What he saw was a teenage girl clutching her father’s white and blue hand, sobbing, and begging for someone to tell her if he was dying. She put her head to his chest and started mumbling something about stars.
            In between giving verbal medication orders, a short male doctor in a rumpled lab coat would turn his head over his shoulder and tell the girl her father had C. Diff and that he would go to the ICU if his blood pressure stabilized.
            “IF?” she shrieked. She drew in a sharp breath and then another. And another, and another, without pausing to exhale. “What do you mean, ‘if’?”
            “I can’t promise you anything,” the intern shrugged. “But if you give us some space we can do our jobs right. Say goodbye and go with the security officer.”
            She couldn’t bring herself to say goodbye. Not even bye. It would have felt like she was saying goodbye forever. Maybe she was. He had been silent from the time he fell on the bathroom floor. The last thing she said to him before that was “good night.” Thinking of that brought a tight pain to her chest. She didn’t want there to be a last word. Standing by his bedside, desperately hoping even for him to open his eyes, she had never felt so alone.
            “Daddy,” she choked. “Wake up. Please.”
            His hand twitched. The doctor told Helen it was a reflex, but she knew he had heard her.
            When Helen was lead away by the officer, she started to quiet down, but she was still shaking all over. Donna walked over to her and asked the security officer to let her stay with her. He shook his head gravely.
            “I’m sorry ma’am, but I can’t let her stay here,” he explained.
            Donna used the age difference between her and the security officer to her advantage, and gave him a disappointed frown. It was the same one she used on Ashley when she came back from a party smelling like vodka, and it shamed him into loosening his grip on Helen’s arm.
            “They want to put him in the ICU,” Helen whimpered. “They wouldn’t tell me why.”
            Donna nodded. “I’m so sorry, Helen. They should have told you why.”
            “The doctor said something about Diff.”
            “C. Difficile. It’s a bacterial infection. It’s usually not this bad.”
            “I tried to keep him safe, but—”
            “This isn’t your fault, honey.”
            “I couldn’t do it.”
            Donna looked over Helen. She had started to clutch her stomach and looked pale. There was a new red spot on the back of her pajama pants. “Helen, look at me. Tell me about the blood. Are you feeling nauseous or feverish?”
             “I’m not sick. My period started. I’ll get something later.”
            “I’ll get you a pad. I’m sure the girls upstairs can get you some clean clothes.”
***
            A few hours later, Reuben was cleared to go upstairs to the ICU, and Helen followed a few feet behind him. Donna had left to take Ashley home, but gave Helen her cell phone number first, in case she wanted to talk to someone.
            The ICU nurses kept giving her father IV fluids and electrolytes, and he slowly rose back into consciousness. They told Helen that when he woke up the last thing he remembered was walking into the bathroom feeling nauseous. She exhaled with relief, and asked when she could see him. Looking at her clothes and seeing her gripping her belly, they first whisked her away and took her vitals. After deciding that she didn’t have C. Diff, they offered her a packet of ibuprofen tablets for her cramps and a clean set of scrubs, adding that her father’s insurance would be billed eight dollars for the ibuprofen.
            “Can I get rid of these?” she asked, pointing to her pajamas.
            They enthusiastically nodded yes, and led her to the patient shower.
            Helen threw her pajamas into a hazardous waste bin. She showered for an hour, scrubbing her body until it was pink all over. She changed into a set of blue scrubs, and curled up in the family lounge of the ICU to go to sleep. Her belly still bothered her, but she was just tired enough that once she curled her legs into her stomach, she fell asleep. It was the deep, dreamless sleep that only comes with complete exhaustion or heavy medication. When she woke up, one of the residents was sprawled out on the couch across from her, snoring. It was nine in the morning, but she still felt like it was the middle of the night. She bummed another pad and more ibuprofen off the nurses, and forced herself to walk around a bit to get her thoughts straightened out. Before she could visit her father, she had to wash her hands, put on a yellow paper gown, cover her shoes with paper booties, and wear gloves and a mask. Glancing at her reflection in the window, she thought of the men in white suits who took away E.T. She could only see her eyes. She asked why all this was necessary, and her father’s nurse reminded her that Westwood was trying to reduce the incidence of C. Diff across the hospital.
            She sniffed her scrubs before she went inside. Her skin smelled like Dial soap. It was sharp, almost like men’s soap. She ran it through her hair in the shower the night before, just in case, but it didn’t feel like she had done enough to get herself clean.
            Reuben woke up when she cracked open the door. His nurse was setting up another infusion and explained that he would need intensive fluid replacement and antibiotics for at least three days. The lab confirmed Donna’s initial suspicion of C. Diff.
            “But he’ll be okay?” Helen asked.
            “His chances are fine. Dr. Kutzner is going to hold off on the chemo until this is out of his system. He’s doing much better than last night.”
            “Okay.”
            Reuben looked over Helen’s gown and mask. “What’s with this?”
            “Special precautions.”
            Her father yawned deeply. “Sorry. I’ve been getting up every few hours to… you know, and they want to check my blood pressure and temperature every hour.”
            She rubbed his shoulder. “I know, Dad. I’m just so happy you’re okay.”
            Reuben was confused about why his daughter suddenly threw her arms around his neck and started crying, when she said she was happy. Sometimes he heard her crying at night, when she was trying to fall asleep, and tried asking her the next morning if she was okay. She would always say she was fine, or that she would be, but then she would poke at her eggs and toast for a while, her eyes downcast. He wondered if it had something to do with Sam; he hadn’t been back to the house since Helen told him off.
            “Leni?”
            “I didn’t think you were gonna wake up.”
            He remembered feeling really sick the night before, and waking up in a hospital bed, but he had been hospitalized enough times for infections that he assumed he was just admitted to the hospital because he was a cancer patient. Even when he had something that didn’t make him feel that sick, Dr. Kutzner would insist that he have IV antibiotics and be kept in private rooms to keep him from catching other patients’ illnesses. He thought that maybe Helen heard him throwing up, and called Dr. Kutzner, and he told her to call an ambulance because it was so late at night. But from the way Helen was being so clingy, he began to think that maybe he had gotten close to dying. He thought someone told him he was in the ICU.
            “Are you gonna stay here all day?”
            “Yeah.”
            “You shouldn’t. They’re taking me down for a CT scan soon.”
            “I can wait.”
            “Go downstairs sweet pea. Get something to eat.”
            Helen shook her head. “I’m fine. The nurses gave me some crackers.”
            “I’m sorry you had to see me like this.”
            “Stop… I’m so happy you’re awake.”
            “Sweet pea, what’s wrong?” He nuzzled her forehead. That used to calm her down when she was restless. But she was inconsolable.
            Helen was too tired to muffle her sobbing. Her mind was still stuck on the night before. When she forced herself to sleep, she still wasn’t sure that he would survive. In the shower, she saw a series of snapshots from their life, cataloging the pitch of his laugh, the soft, tender way he talked about her mother, and the warmth of his hand, in case she never had them again. At the same time, she tried to imagine herself getting older with him still there. She wanted to have him around for her graduations and to see her get married and have children, but that night she would have settled for another year, even another day.
            “Was I really that sick?” he asked.
            She started to step back. “I need a minute.”
            It wasn’t until later that day, when Helen went home to get some of her clean clothes, that Reuben was able to fill in what happened the night before. His day nurse told him that Helen found him in the bathroom, unconscious, and called 911. In the ED, his blood pressure started dropping so low that his heart almost stopped, but he started to stabilize as he got more fluids and medicines. She said that the night nurses almost thought Helen had C. Diff too because her clothes were covered in vomit and her pants had blood stains. 
            “She saved your life.” 
            After his first attempt to eat solid food (green Jell-O), Reuben saw Donna in his doorway, dressed in the same infection control gear Helen had to wear.
            “Do you work in the ICU too?” he asked.
            “No, this is my day off. I wanted to check in on Leni.”
            “When did you talk to her? I was in the ER last night and she was apparently there the whole time.”
            “I was there with Ashley. She broke her arm, and they put her right next to you.”
            “My day nurse told me what happened to me, but all she said about Leni was that the night nurses thought she was sick because she had throw up.”
            “I don’t know how much Leni would want you to know,” Donna hesitated. “What you should know is that she was by your side for almost the entire night, watching over you. But she was terrified. She didn’t know what was going on, and she thought… well… she thought she might lose you.”

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