Showing posts with label The Fiennes. Show all posts
Showing posts with label The Fiennes. Show all posts

Monday, April 23, 2012

Fiennes Character Designs



One of the biggest challenges, after figuring out a mental picture of a character, is translating that onto paper. 

Helen always had thick, curly brown hair and an expressive face. Her dramatic eye rolls and stubborn questioning were accented by big, round eyes and well-shaped (but not thin) eyebrows. When I tweaked her face shape a bit, I turned to a website on hairstyles for different face shapes. For more complicated expressions/poses I use stock photos, but my basic picture of her has been pretty consistent for the past six years.

Perhaps because he's a quieter character, Reuben did not have many distinguishing features for a while. When I started writing the book, I thought of him as a tall, but otherwise unremarkable middle-aged white guy. A few extra pounds, some chemo-induced hair loss later on, but nothing memorable. 

When I tried drawing his face, though, I ended up modeling him after a younger Paul Sorvino. I realized that a round face and somewhat prominent nose helped make Reuben look more similar to Helen, but dissimilar enough that she could still share some of her mother's features.

Donna Bianci (the labor and delivery nurse who delivered Helen and later becomes an oncology nurse) was also a challenge. My mental picture of her is a pediatric nurse from Children's Hospital Boston in Waltham. But in terms of personality, she has elements from three different nurses I've worked with (all of them were named Donna). Since she reminds me of four very real people, I wanted to make her visual design from scratch. It's still in progress.

Katie and Chloe Green (two sisters who appear much later in the book), like Reuben, seemed to come alive in the drawing process. They were written as short, blonde, and petite, but their faces were unclear. Looking at my current sketches of both of them, I was most satisfied with how much they resembled each other, and with how their expressions came out. Sometimes that can be the hardest thing to nail in a picture.

Pictures below.

Saturday, April 21, 2012

A Playlist for The Fiennes

One of my favorite resources for writing, besides Wikipedia (a great source of moderately-detailed information on drugs and diseases), is well-chosen music. Having a song in the background that reflects the mood of the section or a character's personality I'm working on helps me visualize the scene, intensifying the actions and dialogue.

Often, I turn to my bookmarks in Firefox for a "mood" song not in my iTunes library (mainly instrumentals from James Horner and late 90's/early-to-mid 00's pop, depending on the scene).

I also have an iTunes playlist, mostly of 90's and 00's pop and alternative, for this very purpose. Most of the songs I think direct relate to Helen's stubbornness and passion ("Fighter" and "Beautiful" being two of the main ones), while others voice her envy of her peers' less stressful lives ("Could be Anything" and "Where Does the Good Go"). There are also "triumph" songs for the high points when Reuben and Helen manage not just to survive, but to come out stronger than before.

To see the full playlist, click on "read more."

Wednesday, April 18, 2012

January 2007

As you may have noticed, the excerpts from The Fiennes are not back-to-back. This piece is set during Reuben's second bout with leukemia. It has been the hardest section to write on an emotional level, but I also felt like I got closer to understanding my characters. Comments are welcome.

Sunday, March 25, 2012

The Fiennes: Biopsy/Diagnosis

The following takes place after Reuben's visit to the Emergency Department.

Monday, March 12, 2012

The Fiennes - October-November 2006

After we learn more about the oncology nurses' thoughts on Helen, we return to the Fiennes house. Helen and Sam's relationship takes a new turn, while Reuben struggles with what to tell his daughter about love and sex.


The Fiennes - September 2006

In between the January 2006 chapter and this one, Helen and Reuben each have a number of ups and downs (which I'm still writing out). One of the main "ups" is Helen and Summer's junior prom, and the girls trying to figure out college plans.

Helen's first day of her senior year turns out to be a lot crazier than she thought.

Featuring Helen, Reuben, Pete, Summer, and Principal Klein.

Saturday, January 21, 2012

The Fiennes (January 2006)

In between this excerpt and the previous one, Reuben explained to Helen's English teacher what was going on in their family. Helen "downsized" their Christmas decorations from a full-size tree to a table-top tree, and Reuben gives her the set of ornaments he originally gave her mother for their first Christmas. (Helen's mother died in labor, which is discussed in the prologue).

The settings: January 2006; Westwood Hospital, Fiennes house, Pleasant Valley High. 

The Fiennes (pages 38-42)

 In between this excerpt and the preceding one, Helen's English teacher noticed that her academic performance is declining, Helen started donating platelets (cells that help the blood clot), and Helen started to show signs of caregiver stress. This section is set in December 2005.



The Fiennes (pages 27-32)

 This excerpt immediately follows the previous one, and includes most of the November 2005 chapter. The scene with Ballpoint Lady was one of the most fun for me to write, even though, like Helen, I'd probably want to run away from her in real life.

FYI: Fludarabine and Chlorambucil are chemotherapy drugs commonly used to treat CLL (the type of leukemia Reuben has).


The Fiennes (pages 23-27)

In the previous excerpt, Helen Fiennes and Jess Baker were suspended for fighting on school grounds. When they came back to school, Jess was embraced by her peers but Helen and her friend Lydia were no longer welcome, and found a new table in the cafeteria.

The following excerpt takes place in October 2005, shortly after Helen's return to school. Helen and her father (Reuben) are the main characters.



The Fiennes: Aftershocks (pages 15-18)

The following is an excerpt from the beginning of my novel The Fiennes. The scene: Pleasant Valley High School, fall 2005. Helen Fiennes is the protagonist. Jess, one of Helen's fellow cheerleaders, may have intentionally let Helen fall during cheer practice the preceding day.