Saturday, January 21, 2012

The Fiennes (pages 23-27)

In the previous excerpt, Helen Fiennes and Jess Baker were suspended for fighting on school grounds. When they came back to school, Jess was embraced by her peers but Helen and her friend Lydia were no longer welcome, and found a new table in the cafeteria.

The following excerpt takes place in October 2005, shortly after Helen's return to school. Helen and her father (Reuben) are the main characters.



            When she got home, Helen logged her father off on their desktop and logged herself in. He usually didn’t get home until 5, so she had started to use the time he was away to practice her dance steps in the living room and throw a few punches at the air. Her favorite song for these sessions was “Hollaback Girl,” not just for the beat but mainly for its slick depiction of confronting a vicious high school rival. She turned the volume all the way to maximum and threw a mean right hook when she heard the garage door open. Her father shuffled through the door from the garage to the kitchen drenched in sweat, his cook’s apron hanging over his wrist.
            “Sweet pea, can you make dinner? I need a nap.”
             Reuben fell back into the powder blue armchair in the living room, the apron sliding off his wrist onto the floor. Helen held her palm over his forehead. His whole face was pale and clammy, but his forehead was hot. He barely moved when she rubbed his shoulder. Suddenly the kitchen phone rang.
            “Helen, it’s Pete. Did your father get home okay?”
            “He’s home.”
            “I told him not to drive, but you know how he is.”
            “Whoa, whoa, whoa.” Helen lowered her voice. “What happened?”
            “He passed out at work today. Almost hit his head on the range. Good thing Jake used to be a linebacker. No one else could have caught him.”
            “Why didn’t you call an ambulance?”
            “He started flipping out the minute someone said 911.”
            Helen took a deep breath out loud. “If it happens again, you better call.”
            “I’m sorry Leni, but I’m not his mother, I can’t tell him what to do.”
            “Goodbye, Pete.”
            Helen hung up the phone and knelt down next to the blue armchair, biting her lip as her eyes began to water. She clasped her father’s hand in hers, praying that the sinking feeling of doubt in her stomach was unfounded. Half an hour later, he stirred.
            “Dad? Are you okay?” she asked.
            He wiped the sweat off his forehead and started to stand back up.
            “Yeah. Just a little tired.”
            For a few seconds, he couldn’t see his daughter anymore. Her voice sounded like it was coming from a tunnel, screaming for him, and then faded out. There were brown and green shadows that filled his vision. After a flash of light, everything went black. When he came to, Helen was holding him up, barely, her knees straining under his weight. Suddenly, she pushed him back into the chair and ordered him to put his head between his knees. She pulled her cell phone out of her pocket and dialed 911.
            “I’m fine,” he protested.
            She merely shook her head. “My father fainted earlier this afternoon at work and now he collapsed in our living room… He’s conscious now… No… Yes… No… 97 Green Valley Way. I’ll stay on.”
            Five minutes later, an ambulance was parked on the street. Helen opened the door for the EMTs and went in the ambulance after her father. For several months, she thought he was just tired from working long hours at the diner. He was trying to put away more money for her college expenses, not to mention things like prom (coming up in the spring) and long overdue repairs around the house. Most of the waitresses and regulars at the diner had noticed that he had gotten paler, slower, more tired. But they joked that he still had the appetite of a teenage boy. Somehow, since he wasn’t losing weight and could still whip up the best pancakes in Valley County, it was difficult for them to believe that he could be sick. Helen tried to remember the last time her father had seen a doctor for anything. He thought it wasn’t necessary, even at his age. But then, she thought, maybe if he had seen someone they would have seen this coming. Whatever it was.
            In the ambulance, the EMTs unbuttoned her father’s shirt halfway and rolled up his pant legs to attach the leads for an EKG. Two leads were stuck on his calves, one near each wrist, with a crescent moon of leads on the left side of his chest, and a final pair of leads on the right side. Helen leaned over to look at the EKG reading, even though she wouldn’t be able to interpret it. But she did catch the EMTs nodding in approval of the spikes. They worked quickly, taking his vitals, doing a finger stick for a blood sugar reading, and only commented that his pulse was quick and weak, and he had a fever. Helen frowned. Something was not right. She wondered how she couldn’t have noticed it earlier.
            They arrived at Westwood Hospital, dropping Reuben and Helen in the emergency department. Before Reuben finished buttoning his shirt, the triage nurse whisked him away to an exam room. Helen bolted after him, and was told to sit down in the waiting room.
            “You can see him when they’re done with his bloodwork.”
            “But I’m his daughter!” she shouted out. “Let me see him.”
            “Sweetheart, you have to sit down,” the nurse insisted. “This is just going to upset you.”
            “You’re already upsetting me by keeping me out here!” Helen screamed. “I was there! I can tell you exactly what happened!”
            She began to step towards the patient care unit, and the nurse threatened to call security.
            “Can’t you tell me why I can…?”
            No one answered her. Most of the people in the waiting room glanced in her direction, looked her over, pausing to read her eyes, and returned to their month-old copies of People and Better Homes and Gardens. She wondered what they were looking for. Did they think she was crazy or something? One of the women scolded her son for turning around in his chair to watch her, telling him not to stare. Ten seconds later, Helen caught her looking at her.
            Helen kept twisting her hair around her fingers and tapping her toes. She periodically stood up to take the pressure off her tailbone and walk around. She had waited almost two hours when a middle-aged woman with a lot of turquoise jewelry approached her.
            “Helen, I’m Sasha Pearlman,” she said slowly, annunciating her name. She placed her hand over her heart. “I’m a social worker.”
            “Where’s my father?”
            “Honey, I think we should meet in my office first.” Sasha placed her hand gingerly on Helen’s arm, as if she were a lost child.
            “No,” Helen protested. “Tell me where he is.”
            “We’re trying to get a clearer picture of your family,” Sasha continued, walking through the side exit of the ED, towards a pathetic looking side office. The bookshelves were overstuffed with social work journals, binders and loose papers.
            “What do you need to know about our family?”
            “We feel that one of the most important components of healing is a supportive home environment. Now, we need to know who else you and your father live with.”
            “No one.”
            “So your mother and father are divorced?”
            Helen’s eyes widened. “He’s a widower. Don’t you have that in your file?”
            “I’ll write that down… Now, when did your mother pass away?”
            “When I was born. October 20, 1988.”
            “Oh. Is there anyone else in your family who you and your father rely on for support?”
            Helen sighed. “We rely on each other.”
            “No, dear, I mean, if one of you were in serious trouble, who would you call? Your grandparents? An aunt or uncle? Cousins?”
            “No. It’s always just been us.” Helen scoffed. “You don’t have to make that sad face. We’ve gotten along just fine by ourselves.”
            “If that’s the case, I’m going to have you meet with Dr. Kingston now.”
            Dr. Kingston was very quiet when Helen arrived at her father’s bedside. She straightened out her lab coat and told Helen to sit down.
            “I’m not sure what to tell you both,” she murmured. “We got the test results back. Mr. Fiennes, your B cells are elevated. Those are a kind of white blood cell. That concerns us because it could suggest some serious illnesses.”
            “Like what?” Helen asked.
            “Leukemia.”
            “What?”
            “We have to do more testing to figure out what we’re dealing with, exactly. In the mean time, we want to keep your father overnight so we can give him a platelet transfusion. We think that might help bring some of his numbers back to normal.”
            When Dr. Kingston left, Reuben started to shudder. Tears pooled in his eyes. Watching him, Helen felt her stomach sinking into a pit. The beeping of the cardiac monitors and pagers in the ER, and even the moaning of a woman who had been in a car accident, no longer hit her. She inhaled, and pushed away the anger she had felt towards Jess, towards Kristen, and even towards Max. As a wave of new nurses and doctors broke through the curtain, she forced herself to stand up straighter, and lift up her chin. Her father had stopped listening, not even blinking when one of the doctors mentioned a bone marrow biopsy. Helen grabbed his shoulder.
            “Dad.” She nudged him again. “Dad, we can go home. They want to do the biopsy tomorrow morning. I told them I’d drive you.”
            “No,” he dismissed. “Leni, you have school tomorrow.”
            “Um, I think driving your father to a biopsy counts as an excused absence.”
            “That’s not what I meant,” he whispered.
            “Can you give us a minute?” Helen asked the resident oncologist who had been hovering over her shoulder.
            She drew the curtain closed and leaned in. “What do you mean, ‘no’?”
            “Helen Grace, I can’t let you do this.” He clasped her hand. “I’m supposed to be taking care of you. Not the other way around.”
            “Dad, you can’t fight something like leukemia by yourself.”
            “Honey, no one’s said for certain that I have it.”
            “No, Dad. They did.” She paused. “I think you drifted off when that guy Dr. Kutzner was talking. He wants to do the bone marrow biopsy to see how bad it is.” 
            “Damn.”
            “We’re going to beat this thing,” she told him and herself.

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